How touching.
This was one of the best flashes I've ever seen. Why? Even though the graphics could have been better?
Because I love your philosophy. Call me a sap, whatever. But I can see your heart and mind through this flash and they are beautiful.
I am fortunate to see this and has really made my day after a five hour cooking lab along with emotional situations the day before.
It doesn't matter that your animation could or couldn't be better, your style was obvious throughout the animation and i kinda like the fact that you lined the other characters while curving for the girl. Kinda adds dimension on a different level specifying the girl and how she changed others. It was a beautiful flash. A once in a lifetime that one'd really see here.
I suggest checking out Viano, he has potential like you but I think at this current point in time, you're a little more further along changing the world^v^. Good luck.